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Errors in CPDL #1424
Most errors also apply to the keyboard reduction.
- Bars 2 & 4, alto 1: cautionary ♭ in bar 4 is correct but then surely there should also be one in bar 2?
- Bar 8, soprano: cautionary ♮ on the minim should just be a ♮ (ie. no brackets)
- Bar 12, tenor: slur missing
- Bar 24, soprano: a cautionary ♭ on the A would be useful
- Bar 27, soprano, alto 1, alto 2 should read "them", not "those"
- Bar 33, alto: surely the final minim of the bar should be an E ♮? This would make sense of the cautionary flat in the next bar.
- Bars 22, 34-7, 40 left hand keyboard reduction: if this is to be notated in two voices then it should be consistent (tenor note stems and flags should point up and bass ones should point down)
- Bars 36-7, all parts: should read "imagination", not "imaginations"
- Bar 43, left hand keyboard reduction: the crotchet rest is a unnecessary and confusing
- Bars 43-44, alto 2: very unlikely. should read something like this:
-alt -ed the hum -ble and meek.
- Bar 49, tenor 1: "right" should be "rich"
- Bars 55-58, left hand keyboard reduction: bass line missing
- Bar 57, bass: minim should be one beat later ie. crotchet rest, C minim, F crotchet
- Bar 65, alto: cautionary ♭ would be useful for the A
- Bar 75, alto: first note should be F, not G
- Bar 86, AATTB: "my" should be "mine"
- Bar 93, keyboard reduction: illegible
- Bar 100, tenor: crotchet on 3rd beat should be dotted (remove the rest)
- Bar 102, alto 1: note values should be as other parts
- Bar 114, tenor 1: minim A should be a ♮
--Bobnotts talk 21:17, 13 July 2009 (UTC)
- Bar 64 tenor 1: should be D♮s, not D♭.